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Tears filling her eyes, Corey laced her arm
around Charlie’s and they walked out.
Emptiness filled
him, but he made no move to chase after her as their forms disappeared through
the crowd. It wasn’t supposed to be this way. But she’d hurt him first, right?
He caught
everyone’s glare and knew he’d been the jerk in the first place. God, I’m just
a jealous idiot.
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That six definitely makes me want to read more. Well done! :)
ReplyDeleteI love jealous idiots in fiction, lol! Wonderful teaser. I agree, makes me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteI love it when a guy realizes he's wrong. Great six!
ReplyDeleteOh the regrets! Glad he recognized he was at fault!
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I like the 'I'm just a jealous idiot' bit. Nice six!
ReplyDeleteGreat job, in my mind I'm yelling "go after her, go after her."
ReplyDeleteGREAT six!!!! You can feel his frustration!
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