Here are six more sentences (unedited) of my work in progress, Inamorata.
Her heart ached for him, her body longing for his touch. She moistened
her lips in anticipation of his kiss. She lifted her torso up off the bed just
enough to pull him into her arms. But, he had vanished. “No, don’t go, no.” As
her dream man disappeared, she woke up verbally begging him not too leave her,
again.
Have an awesome Sunday!
Cheers,
Keira
Interesting six. Now I'm wondering if the man was actually in her dreams, or a ghost or something.
ReplyDeleteA dream man that has left her...again? Hmm, is he a reoccuring dream or what? Tell me! lol
ReplyDeleteAw, poor soul, that must be so frustrating, who is he? Tense.
ReplyDeleteJuicey! What a great idea Keira. Do you use this as a writer's warm up?
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Oh no, how dream or not, he could have stuck around a little longer. Very nice six :)
ReplyDeleteDang! Don't you hate when that happens? LOL Nice six!
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